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Essay Paper 2013 UPSC Mains

Write an essay on any one of the following topics, in not more than 2500 words. (250 marks)

  1. Be the change you want to see in others (Gandhi)
  2. Is the Colonial mentality hindering India’s Success?
  3. GDP (Gross Domestic Product) along with GDH (Gross Domestic Happiness) would be the right indices for judging the wellbeing of a country
  4. Science and technology is the panacea for the growth and security of the nation.

Courtesy: Mr.Abhi Kapoor

  • @Mains-Players: which essay did you write and what points did you include in it? (Reply after Mains is over.)
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2013 vs 2012 Paper

20122013
No word limit mentioned.they’ve specifically instructed “Not more than 2500” words
Attempt any one out of four essays.Same. Attempt one out of four essays.Despite speculation that more than one essay will be asked.
200 mark| 3 hours250 marks | 3 hours (which you already know)
Asked essay about Gandhi’s idea on ‘Swadhinata’, ‘Swaraj’ and ‘Dharmarajya’, and their contemporary relevance to Indian democracy.Gandhi Prem continues: Be the change you want to see in others.
Science vs. MysticismSci.Tech=Growth + security for nation.
Economy on Economy: PPP= Boon / bane?Love for economy continues: GDP + Gross Domestic Happiness (GDH)
women related essay asked
  • No, despite wide speculations due to frequent news of crime against women.
  • Similarly, nothing on Criminalization of politics, Indo-China, Indo-Pak, elections, Mangalyaan, Chess, Bharat Ratna etc.
  • However, to drag the speculation non-seriously: During Bhutan elections (July 2013), most newspapers mentioned about its “Gross National Happiness (GNH)”. So examiner must have got inspiration from there to ask essay on GDP vs GDH.
Three essays are in ‘question’ format- requiring you to take a ‘stand’. Observe

  1. Is the criticism that the ‘Public-Private-Partnership’ (PPP) model for development is more of a bane than a boon in the Indian context, justified?
  2. Science and Mysticism: Are they compatible?
  3. Managing work and home – is the Indian working woman getting a fair deal?
Only one essay in ‘question’ format:Is the Colonial mentality hindering India’s Success?

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145 Comments on “[Download] Essay 2013 Question Paper of UPSC Civil Service Mains”

    1. Hey thanks steve, really useful Especially for case studies.

      1. You are welcome nithesh… Just want to help others too…

  1. Would have written on the topic “1.Be the change you want to see in others (Gandhi)”

    1. Introduction: Why change is necessary and how individualistic change can bring about a total revolution in people’s thought process

    2. Body
    2a. Primarily Gandhiji’s contribution in Indian Struggle for freedom with his methods Satyagraha and Civil Disobedience, mostly focussing on Gandhiji’s personal self sacrifice of worldly pleasures, taking up of a langot, simple living and high thinking.
    2b. From here I will go to the current political sphere of corruption and sexual violence which is reflected in the leaders
    2c. In an economic point of view I will try to tell about the decrease in CAD due to decrease in imports and how people’s action represent the end result
    2d. Will talk about the women empowerment and the female leaders in various sectors of Indian Corporate Sector
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    .
    .
    Basically in the whole body I will give examples of the importance of leadership in Social, Political, Economical, Cultural and Technological. Will try to show the Historic changes and how it depended upon the change in thought processes of Leaders, such as Lenin, Hitler etc. Will talk about the events that may lead to these changes; Nirbhaya incident etc. Also will talk about functions of parents, teachers in changing the thought process of the youth, training of people in higher positions, ethical training of officers etc.

    Conclusion: Narration on the youth of the country, change in collective consciousness, social evils that are present and how they can be eradicated only with change in thought process.

    1. Good indeed

      1. Amazing analysis

    2. I don’t think this would suffice the statement. I think, they are asking as to how Gandhi adapted himself to changes/challenges he faced and what results they produced.

      Why he wanted to work for the ill-treated workers of Africa? Why did he burn his identity papers? Why did he tonsure his head? Why did he clean bathrooms? Why tolstoy farm? Why did he change his attire to cotton clothes? Why did he use cotton wheel? Why did he fast many times? Why did he preach non-violence and practiced it? Why did he preach peaceful methods of agitation and stuck to it? Why did he started Harijan programme? What were the consequences of his actions? Did he change he wanted to really see?

      Are there any people who got inspired from this? Like Martin Luther King, James Lawson, Nelson Mandela, Khan Abdul Ghaffar Khan, Steve Biko, Aung San Suu Kyi and Philippine opposition leader during the dictatorship of Ferdinand Marcos, Benigno Aquino, Jr etc

      People who got inspired during Freedom struggle because of this and transformed themselves – Patel, Vinobha Bhave etc

      People who still draw inspiration now – Obama, Al Gore, John Lennon etc and peace activists who draw inspiration from him.

      Your intentions are correct Indranil. But the orientation wasn’t right I guess. This should be the orientation. These two links shall help in the orientation:

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mahatma_Gandhi#Principles.2C_practices_and_beliefs

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mahatma_Gandhi#Legacy_and_depictions_in_popular_culture

  2. I would have gone to, “GDP (Gross Domestic Product) along with GDH (Gross Domestic Happiness) would be the right indices for judging the well being of a country”. Reason 1, it gives me enough chances to give my opinion. Secondly, this is something which I personally started believing after I started my career in government. I also felt that this topic can also be correlated with the Gandhian principle of Enoughness and can be extended and cross linked with multiple social and environmental problems.

  3. Hi,

    I would’ve gone for topic 2: Is colonial mentality hindering India’s success.

    Why?
    1. A topic of high contemporary relevance especially given the recent SC ruling about establishing Civil Service Boards to free the bureaucracy from the excessive political influence. This single issue has bought to the limelight the relevance of institutions like the Civil Services, which are colonial legacies, in the present Indian scenario.

    2. Lots of good points to write from, personally I think I’d have started with Kipling’s idea of “The white man’s burden” and how these attitudes have to an extent become institutionalized and ingrained in the Indian psyche.

    3. Challenges posed by this mentality in India’s journey to a world power v/s how can the pervasive presence of such a mentality aid us in the short term.

    4. What are the possible answers to this challenge? can include examples of how Tilak propounded his own version of Indo-aryan theory in the Arctic Home in the Vedas

    Altogether a very interesting and exciting topic.

    Thanks,
    Arun

    1. Brother…. are you not beating around the bush????

      I think, the essay should talk about 3 things mainly.
      1)What does colonial mentality mean? What are the aspects of colonial mentality in us? How are they being manifested?
      2)How are they effecting our success?
      3)solution to overcome the influence.

      I don’t know how “white man’s burden” is relevant here.

      1. Colonial mentality is basically the belief or acceptance that the culture or institutions of the colonial masters is superior to one’s own. The poem I believe is among one of the best manifestations of the idea as it talks of how the colonizers themselves believed that they were doing the native population a favor by colonizing them.

        1. This should be in the framework of what chaitanya said
          we still follow the larger ideas of what colonial govt did
          we can frame this with
          education (finding difficult to change even today..)
          bureaucracy-legislature(immediately forming committees to supress the situation)

          1. What I mentioned is not the framework of my answer, just the reasons why I’d go for topic 2. I was just thinking out loud about those points. They could be included in the essay.

  4. you say P.CHIDAMBARAM as CHIDU, it’s o.k. but you are writing GANDHIJI as merely GANDHI- it’s wrong and not acceptable. atleast pay some gratitude to him.
    thanks.

    1. Its been almost 56 years since Gandhi walked on this planet, there will be a time in not so distant future probably 150 years when Chidambaram would be 56 years since he would also, Jayant, you should be consistent, you should also pay Chidambaram some gratitude.
      Gandhi is his name, not Gandhiji. I find no insult in calling him ‘Gandhi’ and most of the books have mentioned him Gandhi, have you checked with all the publications, the NCERT, State Boards and all the school college books, IGNOU et all? and yea have you raised a voice against those hollywood movies too? A-Team for instance…and when the Big guy from South Africa died, many news channels too? Grow up :) for instance I admire Gandhi, I am proud of Gandhi, Gandhi is my inspiration-> does it sound I don’t show him gratitude? English is a funny language, not your fault.

  5. i want to another civil services mains questions -2013 .sent to me sir .thanking u sir

  6. I wrote on the last topic..science is panacea..
    I argued against it stating science & tech is not a panacea because growth and security is more than just economic growth and tech advances. I buttressed it with examples like world wars…tech advances were a reason for it, cyber crimes etc etc to show that a mind catharsis is equally important and other aspects like culture etc for growth as an individual and nation and harmony

    1. aggie i think u r wrong the only option was to write in favor of the topic. it is not a debate u have to write an essay on given topic …read the qsn again…for example topic 1…can u write aginst that…only in second choice u can write in both the ways but not in 1 3 and 4 topic ..sorry

    2. Don’t worry Aggie….. As long as you have substantiated your view it fine…. Essay is all about how convincing your argument is and the organisation of your thought …

      Focus on your next exams.. Do not go by hearsay!

    3. Hi Aggie,
      I think your understanding of the topic was just perfect. We can start and extend the essay in multiple ways but what matters is the theme around which one has to write and you did only that. People may view this question differently as they have their own perceptions and judgements regrading what is good in science and technology. Science may be good as dicipline to pursue but technology it invents may not for there are people from APJ to Qadeer Khan. Actions of the scientists may not tune with challenges facing commonman_MNCs using it for commercial benefit. For science to be panacea, perfection in intensions and outcomes of not just in scietist’s endeavours but in actions of people who use them.

    4. Panacea : Definitely not and yes you can take a side but better to balance your views.
      few insights:
      Security of nation :
      Food Security- how science is helping in increasing food production. How its unsustainable and use of old age traditional wisdom might help.
      Energy Security- use of science tech in field like Solar and winds.
      Defense Sector, cyber security etc.
      Ecological Security.
      Growth of nation:
      Economic growth.
      e-Governance : avoiding corruption etc.
      Education – space technology for remote.
      Health – ….
      Biotech, nanotech etc

  7. Hey..I have attempted the 4th one about sci and tech…..started as all the nations req it..then about the some leaders who evisaged it…examples of Japan Germany Korea USA Israel..talked about military environmental energy social economic security..how various nations have gone to attain heights in these in achieving security….and growth in each sectors of the Economy ..agri industries services health …I am afraid because of the length..it’s only about 1300words…pls judge me guys

  8. Hey..I have attempted the 4th one about sci and tech…..started as all the nations req it..then about the some leaders who evisaged it…examples of Japan Germany Korea USA Israel..talked about military environmental energy social economic security..how various nations have gone to attain heights in these in achieving security….and growth in each sectors of the Economy ..agri industries services health …I am afraid because of the length..it’s only about 1300words…pls judge me guys evaluate me mrunal sir

  9. I have written about gdp as well as gnp…
    I enjoyed my whole essay writing…

    1. sorry gdh…afty giving gs paer 1 and 2..totally out of mind :)

    2. sorry gdh, not gnp…afty giving gs paer 1 and 2..totally out of mind :)

  10. Topic 4 ,Wrote from a global perspective :(

    .Started off that meaning of growth and security is different at different time and is much more complex now than in the past.
    Multitude of security issues facing every nation right now ( energy , economy , food , environment , social equality etc )
    Science succeeded in solving issues in past ( food revolution , industrial revolution)
    However brought multiple problems which required application of human angles to solve ( World wars , inequality , exploitation)
    Than pointed that along with science nation needs scientific thinking ( Narendra Dabholkar , National Science policy)
    Pointed out that though problems can be solved by science and technology ( gave examples of specific food , industry and environment ) but due to cross border nature of climactic issues coordination is required.
    talked about social , economic and political aspects of security issues solved by science ( better living standard , more income, empowerment to educated ) and also new issues arising ( inequality , resource destruction and IPR regime)
    Wrote about need of ethics in science to solve issues ( science not for individual profit but for social good )
    Concluded that panaceas do not exist , Science is a powerful tool but without a ethical , humane and collaborative environment it can not solve the growth and security problem .
    Examples that I pointed during essay were primarily from India and some global.

    Please suggest any improvement

    1. Will it be wrong if we write it from global perspective..?

      1. Not sure … that’s why I asked people to give suggestion :)

        1. I have heard many of them witing from a global perspective.

    2. you have broadly covered every aspect of security pertaining not just to defence but it is also about combating any shortage of food commodities and energy security which seems to be the driving force behind several diplomatic negotiations in international political platforms. every topic expressed in the larger analysis is what would eventually decide the intellectual depth of a candidate which upsc intends to judge at the end of the day

      1. Can’t agree any less..

    3. “the ” in essay means it is specific to india .

  11. did upsc give lined blank answer sheet or ruled(lined)answer sheet?

  12. did upsc give blank answer sheet or ruled(lined)answer sheet?

  13. Thank you sir…..
    U r superman to me…

  14. I would go for Science and technology is the panacea for the growth and security of the nation.

    1. Science and tech in agriculture-Improve crop yield, Crop awareness by more imparting scientific knowledge about crops, fertilizers, use of e-krishi sewa Kendra’s, Kisan call centre’s, krishi vikas kendras. Efficiency in agriculture by mechanization, better prediction of Rains, Droughts etc. Moving away from rain-fed agriculture by efficient utilization of water resources, Rain water harvesting for recharging the ground water in future use. Increase in the growth of agriculture sector. Food security, Rich farmers and reduction in food imports. Increase in GDP, per capita income.

    2. Science & Tech in Education- Development of scientific temper(Fundamental Duties) in citizens by Spreading education in remote areas through e-learning (Increase in literacy rate.) , Research in new areas no need to go abroad for scientific education, Increasing awareness for adapting and developing new technologies. Lead’s to holistic development of young workforce of India.

    3. Science & Tech in Economy- Finding new sources of mineral and oil resources with the help of better technology help in securing energy security of the country. Growth in power sector by reducing transmission losses by adapting and investing in research and development of new technologies, Will lead to growth in manufacturing sector by removing infrastructure bottlenecks, reducing Incremental Capital Output Ratio, increasing efficiency in production due to better technology, Increase in manufacturing, increase in jobs. Increase in exports, reduction in CAD hence more growth and more GDP.

    4. Science & Tech in Climate Change – Development in the areas of green energy, reduction in global CO2, Prediction of tsunami’s, earthquake, natural disasters(saving human life).Help in controlling and predicting Global Climate Change

    5. Science & Tech in Health Care- New research and development in medical science will lead to prevention and cure of various epidemic diseases.

    6. Science & Tech in Governance: Science and tech will help in bringing transparency in governance and making Govt Servants accountable for their work. Implementing aadhaar (UID) direct cash transfersupliftment of poor’s etc.

    7. Science & Tech in Security of nation: Securing maritime and land boundaries (reduce infiltration) with the help of better technology. Creating Coastal Surveillance hubs and monitor the naval vessels with the help of GPS. Securing aerial routes for the incoming and outgoing aircraft’s, Modernization of soldiers will lead to saving of human life.
    Research & development in manufacturing aircrafts, warships, aircraft carriers, UAVs, missiles will lead to reduction in large chunk of unnecessary imports and India can move from the largest importer to Major exporter (Hence increase in GDP).

  15. GDP (Gross Domestic Product) along with GDH (Gross Domestic Happiness) would be the right indices for judging the wellbeing of a country I WUD GO FOR IT BCOZ IT GIVE ME ENOUGH SPACEE TO ENHANCE MY SELF. I CAN COMPARE EASILY BETWEEN THEM

    1. how would you fill that space?

  16. What if the word limit has been crossed?

  17. Plsss judge my inputs for my essay

  18. Every one knows that science and technology topic is just go to topic.
    But don’t u guys feel that examiner might be expecting something new?
    After all this exam is more about expectation

  19. in essays asking to take a stand should one be writing for and against both that is expressing the counter opinion view too? please elucidate

    1. I would say do cover counter-points but present them as a word of caution or criticism from certain sections . That covers your back and you still keep batting for the stand that the topic wants you to take .

  20. I would write on the change you want to see ..one . It is an open topic and covers lot of dimensions . No preparation needed type topics are my forte !

  21. Hi Mrunal,

    I have opted for the 3rd essay. GDP along with GDH. The synopsis was something like this.
    1. Introduction – Gist of my entire argument.
    2. What is GDP?
    3. Impact of GDP on various sectors –
    a. economic
    b. non-monetary
    i. Failure of trickle down theory – poverty, inequality
    ii. environment, social change
    iii. others
    4. Need for GDH – social perspective
    5. World experience
    a. Bhutan’s argument on gross national happiness
    6. international outlook
    a. World bank vision
    b. ADB’s 2020 vision
    c. Doha 2012 meet
    7. India’s way to GDH
    a. economic reforms – success & failure
    b. schemes being implement and their effectiveness
    c. change orientation
    8. GDP + GDH for holistic and integrated development
    9. conclusion

    1. suggestions please..

  22. Dear sir
    I have written on the topic Science and technology is the panacea for the growth and security of the nation.
    I started with
    1. INTRODUCTION
    what is science and technology
    then the evolution of scientific age from ancient.
    historical relation between civilization growth and S&T

    2. positive Relation between S&T and growth
    a. social growth: agri, nutrition, medical, inclusiveness, education, some other relevant fields.
    b. economic growth: low cost infra, e governance vs business, gdp Vs innovation
    c. cultural growth: p to p contact, secularization etc.
    d. political growth: strategic importance, participation democracy
    e. environmental and ecology growth:climate change, crisis management etc

    3. positive Relation between S&T and security
    external aggression,counter terrorism,boarder management, piracy and trade route security,
    4. negative consequences
    5. conclusion: Ethics and S&T, suggestions to limit the negative.

    I wrote around 2400 words with examples.

  23. Hi Mrunal Sir,

    I have written the third essay..with following points
    1.In my introduction, I given the example of middle east counties where economic growth was more but development was less..
    2. explained the GDP concept as a quantitative process.
    3. merits of GDP
    4. issues of GDP that high GDP don’t ensure high development
    5. efforts of UNDP in developing HDI to address these issues.
    6. Bhutan Story of GNH
    7. explained the components of GNH
    8. Merits of GNH
    9. Issues in GNH that it does not include health, eduaction, security etc.
    10.wrote a separate para for development as a qualitative aspect. Quality cannot be measure objectively. For ex.Beauty.
    11.Development is unending and evolving
    12. its meaning changes from one country to othe county. given an example between India and US
    13. Need to to include missing topics in developing a inclusive development index.
    14. Partly agreed with the statement but gave some more factore to be included .
    15. Concluded with such inclusive development is needed for inclusive development.
    Can you evaluate these points, sir?

  24. Hi Everyone,

    I wrote the 1st topic which was a Gandhian quote.
    I believe in expressing oneself through one’s writing and especially when it comes to essays. Further, I have lost touch of writing so my writing speed has become terrible. Anyway, I loved writing it.
    I began by expounding the quote and substantiating its relevance as manifested through the plethora of quotes by other eminent as well as anonymous writers. I also took excerpts from the Bible to denote the significance of the quote and the principle behind it in the spiritual realm as well.
    In the body of the essay, I took examples from the lives of notable figures like Mahatma Gandhi, Mother Teresa, Abraham Lincoln, etc. who embodied the essence of the quote by carrying the flame of change in themselves and enlightening the lives of those whom they touched. I tried explaining how we can also learn from the examples of such great people and be the change that we want to see in others. I also highlighted the difficulties in trying to swim against the flow of the stream and how to overcome them. With few interesting examples of the ‘Great Salmon Run’ and the inspirational ‘Flame Story’, I concluded my essay with a challenge to the readers to be the change they want to see in others.
    I think I wrote about 2250-2300 words, darkening certain words, expressions, etc. to make them catchy and the best thing was that I had time to go through it again and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

    ENGLISH (COMPULSORY) was lengthy and I think it would have been difficult for those aspirants who hail from Hindi or other regional medium. For English medium candidates like me it was comparatively easier however, HINDI (COMPULSORY) was difficult for me especially the precis and the passage. The passage for the precis was so difficult with mouthful words that I haven’t even heard. I don’t think that such tough words are used in spoken Hindi at all. Other parts were fine. My attempt was about 200+ in Hindi and 296 in English (I didn’t know the meanings of certain words and certain antonyms).

    GS I, II and III were drastic changes, in terms of the question pattern, that UPSC attempted. Most of the questions sought the views of the examinees and required thinking since the themes were ‘critically examine’, ‘evaluate’, ‘justify’, etc. My attempt was about 60-70% in the three GS papers. GS IV again was highly practical and I attempted 200+.

    My optional was economics. While the Paper I was highly theoretical with straight forward questions on models and derivations, Paper II was more general and application based. My paper I was terribly bad while paper II was very good. Attempt at Paper I was only about 50% while for Paper II it was well over 80%.

    Since, the scores of earlier years’ toppers lie somewhere between 50-60%, I at least hope to qualify. Anyway, I am keeping my fingers crossed and continuing my preparation for 2014. This was my first attempt without any formal coaching and while having a job. So, its kind of bitter sweet.

    ALL THE BEST FOR THE RESULTS!!!

  25. Science and technology…

    Intro— ( banner )

    PAST WAS GOOD
    PRESENT IS BETTER
    FUTURE WILL BE GLORIOUS

    My heart fills with pleasure when I see a person at grassroots doing innovation and bringing smiles to the masses…simultaneously I feel proud when India launches AGNI-5 …
    Growth .. inclusive growth explained
    security ….broader concept…..includes… from safe borders to food,education,livelihood etc.

    BODY
    explored 12-13 dimensions.. (More points in context of India, developing and underdeveloped world )
    biotechnology – new medicines,hybrid crops,GM food,IPR issues
    health – new diagnostics, some innovative ideas for affordable,accessible health ,AYUSH, TKDL etc.
    Education – use of IT,
    defense – indigenisation
    environment – Solar,wind,geothermal,bio energy , shale gas, nuclear energy etc.
    IT – cyber security , tele medicine , online education,e-governence etc.
    Innovations at grass roots..
    agriculture – new implements, organic farming etc.
    Governance – online RTI ,
    + 2,3 more dimensions

    Discussed ethical issues like GM crops, drug trials , IPR etc and global connections at relevant place

    Finally 1,2 paragraph on spirituality, value based science and technology,ethics etc.

    then some suggestions to make scientific developments equitable and how to involve the most vulnerable sections

    Conclusion :-
    (not remembering exactly … bringing the main theme )
    A comprehensive scientific model considering the needs of most vulnerable section is need of hour.. It seems that we are marching towards that..
    But no rest until we wipe tears from every eye and bring smiles to every face .

    A holistic scientific development standing on ground of sustainability with equitably distributed fruits .. is the master key for promising future…

    1. good essay to some extent it is close to my structure.

      introduction: nehruji speech at indian science congress 1937
      nehru vision of planning as application of science.
      nehru vision of selfdependent nation can only ensure growth and security.
      how it worked for starting years takled about green revolution ,satellite , etc
      but then talked about STI POLICY 2013 bring that science has failed to help masses and served classes. then taled about inclusive growth and new policy
      vision of inclusive innovation linking science and tech to masses.
      talked about msme sector which employs mojaro chunk of population and role of innovation
      talked about green + gene revolution for food security.
      takled about water security and innovation,
      bio toilets (SCHEDULE CASTE)and social justice ,vision of constitution growth with justice .
      Strategic security
      naxalism ;:uavs , weapons
      communalism:scientific temper and social site monitoring
      external ecurity: army ,navy ,etc strenthening takled about missile ,etc
      but then said not panacea what is needed is good governance.
      takled about goodgovernace
      drew figures
      but again said no good governance without e governance so agin science and tech
      hen went on misuse of sciece talked about us prim prog (HUMAR RIGHT ISSUE)
      Quoted kofi annan” withouth growth cannot enjoy sec, withour sec cannot enjo growth, cannot enjoy either without human rights and goodgovernace
      then takled about scientific temper of nehru in discovery of india ,wrote a page and narendra dhabolkar murder,
      then takled about vivekananda vision of science in modern world,
      then albert einstein on spiritual science
      gandhi and science
      ended with quote of SHAW ON RATIONALITY

  26. Started with Marx’s quote “Philosophers have interpreted the world in various ways; point, however, is to change it!”, saying how arguably the greatest men of 19th and 20th century respectively, though differing hugely in their ideological orientations, focused on change, with former emphasizing the need to change the status-quo, while latter focusing more on commencing that change from one’s own life.

    Explained the theme as basically the congruence between one’s thoughts and deeds, represented par excellence by Gandhi. Then went on to, briefly, showing how Gandhi did it in his life, starting from his experiments in South Africa to improve the lot of the blacks and Indians there, referred to in Guha’s “Gandhi before India”, till his fast in Noakhali in the aftermath of communal violence (his request to Hindus in Delhi to stop the violence; else, he won’t have a face to say Muslims to do so in Pakistan = an example of being the change we wish to see!). Included things like his use of ‘charkha’ and ‘swadeshi’ to implement his ‘Sarvodaya’ model and principle of self-reliance; his cleaning the toilets to show dignity of labour, and his views on question of untoouchability; his experiments with vegetarianism in his early years in South Africa and celibacy in his later years; calling off of NCM after the Chauri Chaura incident as it violated his ideal of change flowing from non-violent movement, etc.

    Main body laid stress on how being the change one wants to see is better than, and more pragmatic to, being cynical and passing remarks sitting on the shore about the pathetic state-of-affairs prevalent and the utopian order envisaged. This could be seen both at the level of individual and collectivity – be it the nation, or humanity at large. Then it could be in the sphere of personal life and in the realm of public life.

    Analysed this from the vantage point of several key institutions in our country (as to how they kind of lack it):
    – Judiciary
    Vishakha judgement way back in 1997, but Internal Complaints Committee set up by the apex court 16 years later, in backdrop of recent complaint by young intern lawyer; Reluctance that was shown initially on part of higher judiciary for assets declaration; The RTI controversy; The judgement on use of ‘red beacons’ (*the last one, not this most recent) but how they (the judges in SC and HCs) themselves are not getting rid of it at their level first, setting an example.
    – Media
    Their exposure of various scams (which I said was a must and welcome step given the fact that Media is the bulwark of ensuring accountability by mobilising public opinion), but the grave issue of “Paid News” as an instance of not putting the house in order! Then expecting fair trials from judiciary, but indulging in “trial by media”; likewise, expecting others to be responsible, but indulging in irresponsible reporting at times.
    – Political Parties
    Each party will criticise the Govt while in opposition (which is healthy for a vibrant, functional democratic set-up) and say they are not doing this and that, but when the same party comes in power, they will not do it themselves! e.g. on communal riots, every party will criticise the Govt of the day for not being able to control, but repeat the same mistakes when they are in power.

    At the international level, gave instances of contradictory and biased stances as:
    – Doha round : Developed nations giving massive subsidies to their rich farmers, but not allowing SSMs for small and marginal farmers of developing nations
    – Climate change: Industrialised countries still emitting much higher per capita emissions, but constraining emerging countries like India in their quest for legitimate socio-economic development.
    – So-called ‘strongest democracies’ and apparent proponents of human rights indulging in gross violations of human rights and destroying civilian lives in the guise of ‘humanitarian interventionism’
    – P-5 nations not giving up their nuclear arsenals as a first step, but enforcing others to sign the highly-discriminatory NPT!

    Then gave some shining examples of those personalities who have brought a ray of hope amid all this:
    – Mother Teresa: She didn’t merely preach compassion, she practiced it!
    – Nelson Mandela: Gave the world one of it’s most progressive constitutions, ensuring equal rights for all, and not indulging in any repressive measures towards whites for the long and ghastly regime of ‘apartheid’

    Wrote how it is important in the context of civil service, as to how civil service aspirants are all ‘ideal’ when they begin, and talk of massive corruption and inefficiency at the beginning, but unfortunately many toe the same line some years down the line; so, how it is important to be the change one wishes to see in the present system, on entering the system, and upholding the highest forms of integrity, absolute commitment to public service, high standards of efficiency, etc.

    Concluded by laying emphasis on need for the youth of the country at large to follow this principle in letter and spirit, to ensure that we reap the much talked-about demographic dividend, and embark upon truly inclusive growth and sustainable development. Finished off with following couplet by great Urdu poet Faiz Ahmed Faiz, as a call to the youth to come and take part in the nation-building activity:
    “Gulon mein rang bhare, baad-e-naubahaar chale,
    Chale bhi aao, ke gulshan ka karobaar chale”
    (Blossoming flowers, the fresh morning breeze blows; Come so that the garden may bloom further…)

  27. helo sir.
    your studyplan are so useful. am preparing for upcoming officer grade B exam. i finished my mba (2012 passed out) and i dont have any job experience .can i able to apply to this exam because dey do ask job experience when applying. but i studied eligibility they haven’t asked about it specifically. and one more doubt is my father(late) government employee then am i belongs to creamy layer r non creamy layer? but i had my community certificate in MBC. looking forward for ur reply soon

  28. hey sir,
    i may have forgt to write question number 4 before attempting S&T question nor wrote topic name on top. how may marks at most i may get penalised ??

  29. i want cg psc mains exam eassy topic, will u plz help me?? ds is ma first time so i have no idea for eassy. plz help me

  30. please update me regarding all the details of UPSC…..

    Thanks!!!!!

  31. Great work sir ….

    Thank you

  32. dear mrunal sir.please try to find out when is the mains result coming???

  33. hi everyone, thanx for tips for your good kind of essay.

    1. hi everyone, thanq so much sir for the tips.

  34. Thank you very very much, for giving list of imp. essay topics.

  35. plz sir guide me how develop essay writings

  36. advice me to write important toipics

  37. You really make it appear so easy with your presentation however I to find this topic to be really one thing that I believe I might never understand. It kind of feels too complicated and extremely huge for me. I am looking forward on your next submit, I will attempt to get the hang of it!

  38. HELLO SIR.. i don’t have any idea abt civil services ….plz help me sir….steps for approching civil services

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